Chapter 25

如何用语法提高写作能力

第二十五章 · 先理解规则,再通过例句把语法变成可使用的表达能力。

语法学习最终要服务表达。写作时可从简单句开始,再逐步增加结构。

25.1 从简单句开始

English is important.
I study English every day.
Reading helps me learn new words.

25.2 用并列句表达并列或转折

English is difficult, but I enjoy learning it.
英语很难,但我喜欢学。

25.3 用从句表达复杂逻辑

原因:

I study English because I want to communicate with more people.

条件:

If I practice every day, I will make progress.

定语:

I like books that teach me useful skills.

名词性从句:

I believe that practice is the key to language learning.

25.4 用非谓语让句子更简洁

普通表达:

I read English articles every day because I want to improve my vocabulary.

更简洁:

I read English articles every day to improve my vocabulary.

普通表达:

When I listen to English podcasts, I write down useful expressions.

更紧凑:

Listening to English podcasts, I write down useful expressions.

注意:分词结构的逻辑主语要和主句主语一致。

错误:

Walking down the street, a car hit me.

这句话字面上像是“车走在街上时撞了我”。应改为:

Walking down the street, I was hit by a car.

或更自然:

As I was walking down the street, a car hit me.

25.5 写作自查清单

写完一段英文后,检查:

  1. 每个句子有没有谓语动词?
  2. 主语和谓语是否一致?
  3. 时态是否符合时间?
  4. 名词单复数是否正确?
  5. 冠词是否遗漏或误用?
  6. 介词搭配是否自然?
  7. 从句是否使用陈述语序?
  8. 代词指代是否清晰?
  9. 句子之间是否有逻辑连接?
  10. 是否有中文直译痕迹?